hi class I am write the biography of eduardo davalos.
his name is eduardo davalos.
his daughter is barbara.
his big sister is Arlen.
he murdered a friend "ulises"on accident.
he go out of prison in 2008.
his hoobies is write soungs in spanish.
his firs is cartel de santa vol. 1.
http://wapedia.mobi/es/MC_Babo#1.
his name is eduardo davalos.
he live in santa catarina,monterrey.
he was born on 16 de november of 1976 in santa catarina, monterrey.
his daughter is barbara.
his big sister is Arlen.
he murdered a friend "ulises"on accident.
he go out of prison in 2008.
his hoobies is write soungs in spanish.
his firs is cartel de santa vol. 1.
http://wapedia.mobi/es/MC_Babo#1.
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hi class I wrOte the biography of eduardo davalos.
his name is eduardo davalos.
he liveS in santa catarina,monterrey.
he was born on 16 de november of 1976 in santa catarina, monterrey.
his nick name is babo.
his daughter is barbara.
his big sister is Arlen.
he murdered a friend "ulises" on accident.
he goT out of prison in 2008.
his hobBY is writING soungs in spanish.
his firsT is cartel de santa vol. 1. (EMM. His first WHAT??)